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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Feb, 20:46

Just finished the book.

Phew. I’m at a loss for words. Depressing af. The book has left me with satisfaction and deep annoyance.

The book can be interpreted in multiple ways.

I interpreted it in 2 layers:

1. Social Critique – The story reflects the dehumanization of workers under capitalism. Gregor, once the family’s breadwinner, is discarded once he can no longer provide for them, much like how society treats those who are no longer "useful."

Gregor Samsa turns into a bug 🐞 one morning and you know what his first thought was after his transformation? ‘I’m late for work’ lol

2. Psychological Interpretation - Gregor’s transformation can be seen as a metaphor for depression or self-perception issues. He becomes an insect not just physically but also in the way he feels about himself - worthless and unwanted. His family’s treatment reinforces his internalized self-hatred.

@booksIreadin2025

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Feb, 18:58

✅3 lessons
✅Gym 80 minutes
✅10,500 steps
✅1 book(almost finished the Metamorphosis by Kafka)

✅meal prep(for lunch tomorrow):
400 grams of chicken breast
120 grams of minced lean beef
3 scrambled eggs
Cooked in 2 tablespoons of olive oil
1300 calories
165 grams of protein

What a productive day I’ve had:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Feb, 18:50

The tendency for news reports in the media to focus on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individual and to society.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Negative developments such as crime, natural disasters, or terrorist attacks often receive a disproportionate amount of media attention compared to positive news. This has created a concern among the public, who express that this has harmful effects on people and society as a whole. While I understand the concern, I believe it might be an overreaction.

One of the proclaimed negative effects of the media coverage of bad news is that it can create an unnecessary fear among the public. As media can have a significant impact on people’s perceptions and emotions, the constant exposure to negative news can distort the reality for many people. The recent COVID-19 pandemic showed us how vulnerable people are to negative news, even it comes from an unreliable source, as it can create panic among the population.

However, in my opinion, these perceived dangers of media focusing more on negative news are an exaggeration. Firstly, this has been going on for so long that people have come to realize focusing too much on bad news is nothing more than a media stunt. As media outlets are well aware of the intrinsic interest of people in negativity, they tend to sensationalize bad news for attention.

In addition, with the widespread adaptation of smartphones and the internet, people now have a greater control over what news they consume. Some mobile apps and websites allow users to subscribe to specific topics of interest and follow more credible sources. This ability of people to filter news goes to show that they are not as adversely affected by the reports of negative news as some people make it out to be.

In conclusion, the concern regarding the effects of bad news on the media mainly stems from the argument that it can lead to reality distortion. However, this seems to me an overstatement as people now possess awareness of tactics used by the mainstream media and they also have more control over their news consumption.

Band 9.0

327 words
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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

16 Feb, 20:55

🔤

1️⃣

6️⃣

The Metamorphosis by Franz Kafka

The cover pictures of the book on the internet are straight out of a horror movie.

@bookIreadin2025

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

16 Feb, 11:51

Youtube comments sometimes make me emotional 🥲

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

15 Feb, 10:50

In March, I’ll launch 3 OFFLINE IELTS standard groups(one is already full)
You can join the following groups:

IELTS standard(3 months)
Tuesday/Thursday/Saturday
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Tuesday/Thursday/Saturday 18:30-20:30

Level required to join these groups: upper-intermediate.

If you don’t have a valid IELTS certificate (6.0+), you need to take the placement tests at Diyorbek’s IELTS(Novza)

For more info: @diyorbeksielts_admin

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

14 Feb, 08:28

Overall, the proportion of children learning to play musical instruments increased considerably between 1996 and 2016. As for the choices of children, while the figure for more than one instrument, keyboard, and electric guitar rose to varying degrees, the reverse was true for piano, violin, acoustic guitar, and other unspecified instruments.

Focusing on the pie charts first, in 1996 56% of children did not learn any musical instruments, slightly more than those who did(44%). After two decades, the former figure fell significantly to 24% while the latter rose noticeably to 76%.
When it comes to musical instruments which saw increases in figures, keyboard showed the biggest rise from 21% to 30%. However, the percentage of children who learned more than one instrument and electric guitar had much smaller increases, from 12% to 13% and 13% to 16%, respectively.

In contrast, 30% of children learned to play the piano in 1996, after which the figure dropped minimally to 27%. Violins(14%) were twice as popular as acoustic guitars(7%) in 1996 and their respective figures decreased to 10% and 3%. Lastly, only 3% of children learned miscellaneous instruments in 1996, a figure which then saw a slight fall to 2% in 2016.

Band 7.0

#task1
#report
#classwork

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

13 Feb, 18:10

I’ve been home alone for the past week and been experimenting with different recipes using the same old ingredients: chicken breast, eggs, and minced lean beef.

Today on the menu(this is my lunch for tomorrow):

500grams of chicken breast
4 eggs
And some veggies 🥗

1000 calories
135g protein.

I’ve been on a similar diet for over 40days
Lost 10+ kg

Ask your questions about weight loss, I’ll answer them to the best of my ability

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

13 Feb, 16:15

Overall, while the majority of the world’s population lives in Asian pacific, the remaining regions show much smaller figures. As for(when it comes to) people’s spending on education, school education(high-school, followed by secondary and primary schools) was the main expense as opposed touniversity and further education.

Focusing on the world population by region, a staggering 54% live in Asian pacific, more than the other regions put together(=combined). Europe came next, with 11%, which was slightly higher than those who live in Africa(10%). While 9% of people were from Latin America and Caribbean, the figures for the remaining regions were smaller, ranging between 7% and 3%.

When it comes to the expenditure on education, high school emerged as the major expense, accounting for 33% of total education spending. This was followed by primary and secondary schools, with the same 26%. University and further education were responsible for the smallest shares, with respective figures standing at 8% and 7%.

Band 7.0

#task1
#report
#classwork

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

13 Feb, 08:58

Once I finish Sherlock Holmes books, I’m planning to read just one author for 2-3 weeks. Not only that, but I’ll also learn about the authors themselves thoroughly.

I’ll start with Franz Kafka. i just got 5 of his most famous books. Let’s see where they take me.

Join me on this journey:)

@booksIreadin2025

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

12 Feb, 19:10

All these planets and Moon look good in the video but if you see them with ur own eyes through the telescope, they look even more stunning

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

12 Feb, 19:06

The good old Moon

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

12 Feb, 19:00

This is Jupiter, taken on the same day

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

12 Feb, 18:49

I took this 3 years ago, on August 10🥲

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

11 Feb, 17:04

Gentle reminder that there is no ‘technique’ in reading. You just have to understand what you read. (We’ll have a lesson on how to improve your comprehension soon)

There are no shortcuts to greatness.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

11 Feb, 04:46

January 4 103.50 to February 11 93.95

-10kg
10 more to go.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Feb, 20:46

I couldn’t wait to get to the end of the book and skipped several stories and just read the ‘Final Problem’

In The Final Problem, Sherlock Holmes is portrayed in a much more vulnerable light than usual. Throughout the stories, Holmes is usually calm, collected, and often in control of any situation. But when it comes to Moriarty, even Holmes recognizes the sheer intellect and danger of his adversary.

Now, I cant wait for his return. The next book I’ll read will be about this: The Return of Sherlock Holmes.

@booksIreadin2025

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

09 Feb, 14:07

I love Sundays 💔❤️💔

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

08 Feb, 08:10

🔤

1️⃣

4️⃣

The Memoirs of Sherlock Holmes by Sir Arthur Conan Doyle.

The book contains 12 short stories, including the one called Final Problem where Sherlock Holmes dies

@booksIreadin2025

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

08 Feb, 05:25

Some people choose to have their first child at an older age.
Why?

Is this a positive or negative trend?

In recent years, there has been a shift towards delayed parenthood. This can be attributed to several factors, and I consider this development to be a positive one.

One main reason behind this demographic change is associated with the financial demands of raising children. Today, providing for a child requires a stable income, access to education, and proper healthcare, all of which can be financially burdensome. Therefore, many couples choose to establish their careers in order to ensure that they have a solid financial foundation before starting a family. Another contributing factor is the change of personal priorities. Modern individuals, especially women, increasingly prioritize education, career growth, and personal development before becoming a parent. This usually allows people to become more emotionally mature and mentally prepared for the responsibilities of raising a child.

I believe this shift is a positive development for two key reasons. First and foremost, those who prioritize career and personal development are more likely to achieve financial stability. Such parents can offer better quality of life to their children. With high incomes, they can afford better education, healthcare, and extracurricular activities, which play a crucial role in a child’s overall development. Another benefit is that mature and experienced parents can handle parenting challenges more effectively. Years of personal and professional experience means that they are often better at managing stress, resolving conflicts, and making more thoughtful decisions. These qualities contribute to a more nurturing home environment.

In conclusion, the reasons behind late parenthood are the increasing costs of raising a child and people’s preference to develop their careers. Delaying parenthood allows people to become financially stable and mature emotionally. Therefore, I think this is a desirable change.

Band 8.0

#task2
#essay
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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

07 Feb, 15:52

#hate_post

O’qituvchilarda ozroq bet degan narsa bo’lishi kerak natijalarni qo’yayotganda. Kanaliga bitta komment yozgan bo’lsa ham, bu mani o’quvchim, mani deb falon ball oldi deb qo’yvorurish kerakmas.

No hate though😂😆

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

07 Feb, 08:58

People ask where I get these books from.

Somebody recommended me https://t.me/CityBooks_Official and it didn’t disappoint.

The books are of very good quality and they print out books of your choice(you can also choose the type of paper used)

You just send the name of the book and they will deliver it in 3-4 days. The prices are also very reasonable.

If you want to order books, use the promo code SANOKULOV15 to get a 15% discount on your first purchase.

Personal recommendation

https://t.me/CityBooks_Official

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Feb, 17:14

Today, the Moon and Jupiter are holding hands:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Feb, 12:46

Where is the attention seekers with their channel names as in the comments section? Oh yeah, I banned them😆😆

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Feb, 12:40

The reason why the second essay scores higher(7.5) is not because it discusses both sides. As far as we know, for the 'positive/negative' and 'agree/disagree' questions, a candidate DOESN'T have to use the balanced approach. So, in this case, TASK RESPONSE score remains the same in both(7.0).

However, the second essay will most probably score higher in LEXICAL RESOURCE(8.0) and GRAMMATICAL RANGE AND ACCURACY(8.0) as it is longer and thus, uses a wider range of vocabulary and grammatical range but the first essay mostly likely scores 7.0 in these criteria.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

05 Feb, 15:21

I re-wrote this essay but this time I used the balanced approach.

You can compare the two essays

Essay 1(band 7.0)

Essay 2(band 7.5)

Why does the second essay score higher?

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

05 Feb, 15:19

Today, family members do not eat meals together.

Is this a positive or negative development?

Families sitting around the table eating meals together have become a thing of the past. I view this development negatively.

This trend, however, has some positives. One potential benefit is that eating separately offers greater flexibility. Today, family members often have different commitments, such as work, school, and extracurricular activities, making it difficult to organize shared mealtimes. By eating at different times, people can plan their meals according to their responsibilities without the pressure of following to a fixed schedule. This flexibility can help reduce stress and allow each person to maintain a routine that best suits their lifestyle.

Despite this, I still think families eating separately is a negative development. One disadvantage of families not eating together is the weakening of family bonds. Shared meals provide an opportunity for family members to communicate, share their daily experiences, and offer emotion support. Without these regular interactions, family members may become more distant from one another, leading to a lack of understanding and emotional connection. For example, children who do not have regular family meals may miss out on valuable guidance from their parents, which can negatively impact their social and emotional development.

Another negative consequence is the decline in healthy eating habits. When families eat together, parents often encourage balanced meals and offer good dietary options. However, with the rise of individual meal times and fast food, many people opt for unhealthy processed food, which can increase the risk of obesity and other health issues. Studies found that children who frequently eat with their families are more likely to consume fruit and vegetables compared to those who eat alone or outside. This means that promoting family meals can lead to healthier lifestyle and overall well-being.

In conclusion, while the decline of family meals provides flexibility, it can lead to weaker family bonds and poorer eating habits. For these reasons, I consider this development to be a harmful one

Band 7.5

#essay
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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

04 Feb, 21:04

Phew 😮‍💨

Just finished the book. It’s been a wild ride.

I thought I was clever when I guessed that the English letter H is an н in Russian but the solution was somewhere else lol 🤔

Great and easy read.

Rating 4.4/5

@booksIreadin2025

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

04 Feb, 09:02

Lobarkhon completed my IELTS standard course last year in December. Studying and taking the IELTS test and more importantly scoring a 7.0 is no easy business when you have a family and children to look after. But Lobarkhon nailed them all:)

🎧 LISTENING 8.0
📖 READING 7.5
✍️ WRITING 6.0
🗣️ SPEAKING 6.0

Congratulations 🎉🎊

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Jan, 20:44

First of all, I apologize that my ‘IELTS’ channel and ‘book’ channel are mixing into one, sometimes.

I’m doing this so you will be my accountability partner for I may easily abandon this newfound hobby of mine otherwise.

And of course, if I encourage some of you to read more books, that’d be the added benefit.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Jan, 20:36

🔤

7️⃣

Just finished the book.

As a huge Sherlock Holmes fan, I might be biased but this is how you write a story.

Full of wit, twist, mystery, and of course exciting revelation at the end.

Rating 4.7/5.0

@booksIreadin2025

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

24 Jan, 09:50

Any reliable and fast book delivery services in Tashkent?

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

23 Jan, 03:20

Some people think that art is an essential subject for school children while others think it is a waste of time.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people emphasize the significance of art lesson in schools, others think that students should focus on other more important subjects. I agree with the former view.

One reason why art lessons are regarded as a waste of time is they are not directly linked to career opportunities. Critics arguethat instead of studying arts, students should concentrate on subjects like science, math, and technology, which are high in demand in today’s job market. These subjects usually offer better financial stability and career growth. Another argument is that generally very few children have artistic interests and talents. Mandatory art classes may not appeal to the majority, leading to a lack of engagement and wasted classroom time. Therefore, it is considered important to prioritize the collective interests of students.

In my opinion, however, art should remain an integral part of school curriculum. First and foremost, engaging in art activities allows students to express their thoughts, emotions, and ideas in ways that other subjects may not. This fosters creativity, which is a valuable skill not only in artistic world but also in problem-solving across various fields. Studying and participating in art can also boost students’ mental wellbeing. Engaging in painting, drawing, and music can reduce stress and anxiety which students experience in school due to exams and deadlines.

In conclusion, art lessons offer limited career opportunities and are not liked by every student equally but such lessons develop students’ creativity and can help deal with stress. Therefore, the argument that art lessons are a waste of time is unjustifiable.

257 words.
Band 7.5

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

22 Jan, 20:38

I don’t know where to start, honestly.

1. The language of the book - even though I read it in Uzbek - is very difficult. Turns out this is Andrei Platonov’s style. In fact, many literary art critics said it’s impossible to translate Platonov’s works into other languages. However, the translation was great to say the least.

2. The story is very symbolic. It is a satirical critique of the Soviet Union. But it’s not satire in comedic sense. Instead the writer uses dark and biting irony to highlight the absurdities and tragedies of Soviet policies.

3. The novella is a tragic story. It left me with feelings of deep sadness and hopelessness.

Easily top 3 books I’ve read so far

Rating 4/5

@booksIreadIn2025

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

22 Jan, 17:38

Pure poetry

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

22 Jan, 11:23

https://ielts.idp.com/book/IELTS?RA=4d52aadc-4f39-48b3-a7a2-21842e1bbc9f

Use the link above to register for the IELTS test(only paper-based test WITH IDP)

Send us the proof that you paid for the test and you can get writing TASK 1 marathon videos.

Only this link. After you register, there will be a reference - Delta LC

@speaking_marathon_admin

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

21 Jan, 17:30

Some people say private cars are the best form of transport in cities but others argue bicycles are better.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion essays.

Some people think that private cars are the most convenient means of transportation in urban areas, while other believe bicycles are superior. I agree with the former opinion.

One advantage of using bicycles in cities is that they are a green mode of transport. In fact, bicycles emit very little carbon emissions compared to other types of transport, such as private cars. If the majority of a city’s population used bicycles instead of private cars, city dwellers would experience much better air quality. Another benefit is that cycling can be a faster way to travel through traffic jams. The majority of cities experience unbearable traffic congestion during rush hours and those who rely on bicycles can not only save time but also avoid the stress resulting from being stuck in a traffic jam.

These arguments notwithstanding, I still favor private cars over bicycles. One main advantage of private cars is privacy. Travelers can have their own space, which allows them to engage in other activities, such as listening to music, talk freely on the phone, or even take a nap. With other means of transportation, whether it be public transport or bicycles, doing these is almost impossible. A further significant upside of private cars is they are faster. Except during occasional traffic jams, cars take people to their destinations more quickly than a bicycle would.

In conclusion, bicycles offer several benefits as they are environmentally friendly and can be time saving in certain situations. However, the advantages of private cars are much greater because they provide privacy and are faster.

Band 7.0

#task
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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

20 Jan, 16:15

Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe childcare facilities, such as kindergartens, take better care of children, while others think grandparent care is superior. I agree with the latter view.

One advantage of childcare centers is they usually offer a structured learning environment. The majority of them have programs designed for children of different age groups, focusing on teaching various skills such as math, languages, and arts, which grandparent care often fails to provide. Apart from this, children also have the opportunity to socialize with their peers. Children can pick up several social skills, including but not limited to collaboration, conflict management, and communication.

Despite this, I still favor grandparent care over childcare facilities. A major upside of is that it offers safety. This security comes from grandparents’ familiarity with home environment, who knows if a child has any allergies or needs to take medication. Parents, as a result, can engage in their other duties with a greater peace of mind. Moreover, grandparent care is a free or cheaper form of childcare service. Grandparents usually don’t ask for fee for taking care of their grandchildren as spending time with them is regarded as a rewarding experience. They also offer their help at short notice or during emergencies, preventing parents from seeking expensive alternatives.

In conclusion, although formal childcare services have a special programs and socializing opportunities, I believe grandparent care is better as it provides safety to parents and is not costly.

Band 7.0

#task2
#essay
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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Jan, 14:54

Everybody’s sending me the video of that scammer woman who thinks she teaches the entire English grammar in 90 minutes.

She knows what she’s doing well. She’s just an attention seeker, who’s incapable of having a civilized conversation. She always plays the victim when called out.

Shunaqalarni zamoni bo’pqoldi.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Jan, 10:37

Gazing at the stars through the lens of knowledge

- Umar

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Jan, 07:09

Shohruza now has 7.5

After scoring 7.0 with a 6.0 in writing(0.5 shy of 7.5), she decided to appeal her writing score, which has now improved to 6.5. Her score improved to 7.5 as well

🎧 LISTENING 8.5🔥🔥
📖 READING 7.0
✍️ WRITING 6.5

✅

🗣️ SPEAKING 7.0

Congratulations, Shohruza:)

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Jan, 06:48

Behzod was in my morning IELTS standard group. The test has been a real adventure for him as he lost his passport after the main test before the speaking test. He was ready to give up and retake the test later. But in the end, with a new passport he took the speaking test and scored 7.5 overall.

🎧 LISTENING 8.5🔥🔥
📖 READING 8.5🔥🔥
✍️ WRITING 6.5
🗣️ SPEAKING 6.0

Congratulations, Behzod:)

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Jan, 05:57

7️⃣

🔤

5️⃣

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

16 Jan, 16:30

School should replace books with computers, games, and movies.
Do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that instead of books, schools should use computers, games, and movies. I agree with this suggestion/proposal for three main reasons.

One key reason why I agree is using modern teaching tools can make lessons more interactive.

Another significant point is using computers and movies can make learning more effective and efficient.

A final argument is that making use of computers particularly can improve children’s digital literacy.

I often tell students to make such mini-essays instead of writing a full essay because writing full essays sucks - it’s boring, frustrating, and time-consuming.

#task2
#classwork

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

15 Jan, 17:35

❤️❤️❤️😂😂😂

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

15 Jan, 08:55

This looks like a promising project

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

15 Jan, 08:55

🔤

2️⃣

The Silent Patient by Alex Michaelides

A psychological thriller with not so interesting characters. The book is rather a slow burn but has a mind-blowing plot twist.

Rating 4.5/5

@booksireadin2025

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

13 Jan, 15:08

The line graph shows the value of clothing which was exported from Bangladesh from 1988 to 2012 and the accompanying pie chart compares the importing countries. Overall, export value of clothing increased noticeably, especially towards the end of the period. It is also clear that while the main importer was the European Union, followed by the US, the remaining countries showed much smaller shares.

Focusing on the line graph first, the value of clothing exported from Bangladesh started at around $2 billion and this was followed by a steady rise to little over $5 billion in 2004. After this, the figure quadrupled by the end of the period, reaching its peak of $20 billion.

When it comes to the destination of exported clothing in 2012, the European Union imported a staggering 60% of clothing from Bangladesh spending over $11 billion. Next came/next on the list was the USA, with 24% clothing exported($4.53 billion). While other unspecified countries accounted for 8% of the total clothing exports, the figure for Canada, Japan, and Turkey ranged between 5% and 1%.

BAND 6.5-7.0

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

12 Jan, 13:12

We started the reading course yesterday
And tomorrow, the writing course kicks off.

You can still join the courses. Today is the last day:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

11 Jan, 13:19

Venus before the sunset

#sky

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 19:10

🌌
Important announcement 📢#sky

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 18:47

Turns out they steal from us too 🇺🇿😆

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 08:47

You can still sign up for these reading and writing courses.

I already shared the weekly homework. Tomorrow, we’ll have the first reading session.

Hurry up.

Sign up: @speaking_marathon_admin

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 08:19

Not a bad day in the office)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 07:25

Marjona is another student who scored 7.5 with the same 7.5 in writing. She has been a very industrious student and hard work paid off.

🎧LISTENING 8.5
📖 READING 7.5
✍️ WRITING 7.5
🗣️ SPEAKING 7.0

Congratulations, Marjona.

#season2425

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 07:03

Jahongir also joined my IELTS standard program in September and took the test on December 28. He pulled off a 7.5 with 7.5 in writing🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

He improved his writing score from 6.0 to 7.5🔥🔥💪💪

🎧 LISTENING 8.0
📖 READING 7.5
✍️ WRITING 7.5💥💥🔥🔥
🗣️ SPEAKING 7.0

Congratulations, Jahongir

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 06:49

Fazilat is another brilliant student. She was also in my IELTS standard program. She’s an up and coming teacher with a huge potential. I’m proud that she scored 7.5

🎧 LISTENING 9.0 🔥🔥🔥🔥
📖 READING 7.5
✍️ WRITING 6.5
🗣️ SPEAKING 7.0

Congratulations, Fazilat.

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 06:36

Zuhriddin definitely has the potential to score 8.0+. He studied in my IELTS standard group for 3 months. Maybe if he hadnt been a Liverpool fan, I would’ve taught him the secret sauce(kidding)

🎧 LISTENING 8.0
📖 READING 8.5
✍️ WRITING 6.5
🗣️ SPEAKING 7.0

Congratulations, Zuhriddin

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 06:33

7️⃣

🔤

5️⃣

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 06:18

Abdulloh is another student with a 7.0 now. He could have scored a little hogher but the exam pressure took a toll on his performance. Still, we’re happy for the result

🎧 LISTENING 7.5
📖 READING 7.5
✍️ WRITING 6.5
🗣️ SPEAKING 6.0

Congratulations, Abdulloh

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 06:08

Shohruza also completed the IELTS standard program and scored a 7.0. I’m super happy to have a student like her in my classroom. We were expecting a higher score in reading and writing but again exam pressure affected her performance

🎧 LISTENING 8.5
📖 READING 7.0
✍️ WRITING 6.0
🗣️ SPEAKING 7.0 💥💥🔥🔥

Congratulations, Shohruza

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

10 Jan, 05:57

Xonzodabegim is an amazing student.
She joined the IELTS standard program with a 6.0 and improved her score to 7.0 with a 7.0 in writing (just 0.5 shy of 7.5). Honestly 6.5 for her speaking is a war crime.

🎧 LISTENING 7.5
📖 READING 7.5
✍️ WRITING 7.0💥💥🔥🔥🔥
🗣️ SPEAKING 6.5

Congratulations, Xonzodabegim

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

08 Jan, 11:09

The writing and reading courses will start at the end of this week(the writing course will kick off on January 11 and reading on January 12)

It’ll be ideal for you if you join today because there are several writing video lessons you need to watch before the live lesson on January 11

Text to the admin to sign up: @speaking_marathon_admin

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

08 Jan, 05:47

Bugun yangi OFFLINE IELTS standard guruhimga birinchi meeting bo’ladi. Soat 14.00da. Guruhda hali joy bor. Qo’shilmoqchi bo’lganlar, darsdan oldinroq kelib placement test topshiring. Yoki IELTS 6+ boladigan bo’lsa tog’ridan to’gri guruhga qo’shilsangiz bo’ladi.

Ma’lumot uchun: @diyorbeksielts_admin

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

07 Jan, 18:13

Old but gold:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

07 Jan, 16:10

9.0 olganlarni ko’riiib yurakni tirnagandan ko’ra dars qilish kerak.
Yoki writing & reading kursimga qo’shilish kerak

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

07 Jan, 14:42

The most useful posts in the channel

1. Band 7+ Task 1 collection
2. Band 7+ Task 2 collection
3. Free YouTube lessons
4. Agree/disagree- rebuttal approach explained
5. How to use ChatGPT and articles to write essays
6. How to describe maps in Task 1

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

07 Jan, 13:16

#mock_test
🆕Navoiyda Yanvar 16 va Fevral 8 ga registratsiya qilgan kandidatlar uchun IELTS SCHOOLDAN mock test

🎧✔️Xuddi testda beriladigan naushniklar;
✏️✔️ Xuddi testnikidek kanselyariya
🧑‍💻✔️ Test atmosphere
📃✔️ Test paperlar yangi va standard darajadagi
🗣✔️ All four skills

🗓

TEST KUNI 12-YANVAR
🏠IELTS SCHOOL NAVOI
https://g.co/kgs/KLLtCN2
Registratsiya —> @ielts_school_admin

💵

100.000UZS

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

07 Jan, 05:09

3 days before the writing and reading courses start:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 20:35

Finally, I decided to revitalize my YouTube channel.

In the video, I talk about how you should organize your body paragraphs when describing maps in IELTS writing task 1.

Should you compare two maps in your paragraphs or should you describe them separately?

Watch the video and find out:)

And yes, hit the like button and leave comments too💗

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 20:33

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oE3s8JAvg88&ab_channel=IELTSwithSANOKULOV

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 17:34

Reading va writing kurslari haqida to’lai ma’lumot olish uchun videoni ko’ring.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 17:22

Such vocabulary and grammar challenges will be included in the writing course.

@ieltswithsanokulov

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 17:21

WRITING AND READING JOINT COURSE

Writing course details:

✅12 live lessons(in evenings)
✅Access to my writing marathon videos(41 detailed videolessons)
✅Feedback on 12 pieces of homework
✅Grammar & Vocabulary exercises
✅Duration 1 months(4 weeks)
✅Price: 400,000 UZS

Reading course details:

✅12 live lessons(in evenings)
✅12 passages + vocabulary list
✅12 articles + vocabulary list
✅Duration: 1 month(4 weeks)
✅Price: 120,000 UZS

We’ll have a livestream on Monday, where I’ll explain the course in more detail.

Both courses will start on next Friday and Saturday(January 11&12)

If you buy these courses until Monday, you can pay:

✅330,000 for writing
✅99,000 for reading
✅(429,000 for both)

Make the payment here:

5614681812034217 - Jurabek Sanokulov and send the receipt to @speaking_marathon_admin

Note: we will not text you first. Don’t fall for scammers.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 16:59

Live stream finished (47 minutes)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 16:48

5614681812034217 - Jurabek Sanokulov

@speaking_marathon_admin

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 16:48

writing 330,000
Reading 99,000
Both=429,000

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 16:15

Live stream scheduled for Jan 6 at 16:15

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 16:15

More than an hour left:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 16:12

Live stream started

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 10:25

Darslar shu hafta boshlanadi. Ungacha kelib placement test topshirib ketishingiz kerak. Agar IELTS 6+ bo’lsa(valid certificate), placement test topshirish shart emas.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 10:19

I’m launching following OFFLINE groups:

PRE-IELTS

Du/Cho/Ju 10:00
Se/Pa/Sha 14:00

Level required: intermediate or higher

IELTS STANDARD

Se/pa/sha 16:15-18:15
Du/Cho/Ju 14:00-16:00

Level required: upper-intermediate or higher.

Guruhlarga qo’shilish uchun o’quv markazimizga kelib placement test topshirishingiz kerak bo’ladi.

Ro’yhatdan o’tish uchun: @diyorbeksielts_admin

Manzil uchun bu yerni bosing.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Jan, 06:37

Today by 21.15, you can still purchase the courses with a discount. After today’s livestream the price will go up:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

05 Jan, 09:38

Tomorrow, we’ll have a livestream to explain the organization of the Writing and Reading courses.

Until then, you can purchase these courses at a discounted price.

Sign up: @speaking_marathon_admin

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

04 Jan, 07:32

If you’re unsure about joining the writing course, this can help you:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 18:00

You can buy the courses separately, btw.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 15:59

WRITING AND READING JOINT COURSE

Writing course details:

✅12 live lessons(in evenings)
✅Access to my writing marathon videos(41 detailed videolessons)
✅Feedback on 12 pieces of homework
✅Grammar & Vocabulary exercises
✅Duration 1 months(4 weeks)
✅Price: 400,000 UZS

Reading course details:

✅12 live lessons(in evenings)
✅12 passages + vocabulary list
✅12 articles + vocabulary list
✅Duration: 1 month(4 weeks)
✅Price: 120,000 UZS

We’ll have a livestream on Monday, where I’ll explain the course in more detail.

Both courses will start on next Friday and Saturday(January 11&12)

If you buy these courses until Monday, you can pay:

✅330,000 for writing
✅99,000 for reading
✅(429,000 for both)

Make the payment here:

5614681812034217 - Jurabek Sanokulov and send the receipt to @speaking_marathon_admin

Note: we will not text you first. Don’t fall for scammers.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 13:57

When are you taking the test?
I’m planning online writing and reading courses.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 11:17

Mahmud also studied in my IELTS standard group. We won the DILC cup together(the guy in the middle holding the cup) and today he conquered the IELTS test with an amazing 7.5

🎧 LISTENING 8.0
📖 READING 7.5
✍️ WRITING 6.0
🗣️ SPEAKING 7.5

Congratulations, Mahmud

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 11:00

Online writing darslardan ham bir dunyo natijalar chiqqan lekin ularni kanalga qo’yolmayman. Sababi ko’p o’quvchilar online darslarni asosiy offline darslariga qo’shimcha sifatida oladi. Face-to-face darsda o’qituvchi va o’quvchi qiladigan mehnat ancha katta. Online darslarimni hissasi juda kam o’quvchining overall balida:)

Lekin hammani olgan natijalari bilan tabriklayman:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 10:36

Islombek also scored a 7.5 today. Considering it’s his first attempt, this is an outstanding achievement.

🎧 LISTENING 8.5
📖 READING 8.0
✍️ WRITING 6.0
🗣️ SPEAKING 6.5

Congratulations, Islombek

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 10:29

I said we’re not done 💪

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 08:21

Saidazimxon is another student of mine who scored 7.5. The reading score could have been higher but still this is an amazing result

🎧 LISTENING 9.0
📖 READING 7.0
✍️ WRITING 6.5
🗣️ SPEAKING 7.0

Congratulations, Saidazimxon

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 08:10

Abdusamad is another brilliant student. While he could have scored an 8.0, we’re glad he could pull off this 7.5

🎧 LISTENING 9.0
📖 READING 8.5
✍️ WRITING 6.5
🗣️ SPEAKING 6.5

Congratulations, Abdusamad

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 08:03

Shaxrizoda is a very talented student. She also studied in the IELTS standard program and scored a 7.5.

🎧 LISTENING 8.0
📖 READING 8.5
✍️ WRITING 6.5
🗣️ SPEAKING 6.5

Congratulations, Shaxrizoda

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 07:59

7️⃣

🔤

5️⃣

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Jan, 07:56

We’re not done yet

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

27 Dec, 07:08

Nodira also completed the same, IELTS standard program. She took the test in a bit of a hurry yet she nailed it.

🎧LISTENING 8.5
📖READING 7.0
✍️ WRITING 7.0
🗣️ SPEAKING 6.5
🔥 OVERALL 7.5

Congratulations, Nodira:)

#2324season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

27 Dec, 07:02

Saida opa completed my IELTS standard group. She’s a very hardworking student, juggling work and IELTS prep. This hard work paid off.

🎧 LISTENING 8.5
📖 READING 7.5
✍️ WRITING 6.0
🗣️ SPEAKING 7.5

Congratulations 🎈🎉🎊

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

27 Dec, 06:56

7️⃣

🔤

5️⃣

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Dec, 15:43

Just watch this video. You dont need to buy a course for 2000$ to become a better learner.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Dec, 15:42

https://youtu.be/5eW6Eagr9XA?si=ichyUQoFpewPigOG

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Dec, 13:49

Live stream finished (37 minutes)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Dec, 13:15

Live stream scheduled for Dec 25 at 13:15

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Dec, 13:11

Live stream started

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Dec, 13:06

Here’s what you can ask questions about:
1) upcoming face-to-face courses(and their contents)

2) upcoming online lessons(and their contents)

3) IELTS in general (but no stupid questions like ‘will I get 9.0 in reading if I lick my cat’ or what should I do to increase my listening score’)

4) Teaching. If you are a teacher urself, and there’s anything that you’d like to know my opinion on, you’re welcome

Other questions will be ignored💛

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Dec, 12:18

We’ll have a livestream today at 18.15. It will not be a formal stream. Just for fun and Q&A. I’ll be outside walking and have nothing else to do💀

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

23 Dec, 20:16

Another useless statistics

You can see Jupiter and Mars right now🤩

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

23 Dec, 20:02

Btw, it’s been 1 year since I scored 9.0

Follow us for more useless statistics😂

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

23 Dec, 12:02

Plus, there will be some amazing results at the start of January(from the September intake)

I also admit that I stopped posting in the channel. Now, I’m on holiday, enjoying this little pocket of peace and quiet. I’ll be back soon💜

💙

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

23 Dec, 11:55

Many people texted me asking if I will launch new groups in January.

Yes!
I’ll launch 2 pre-IELTS and 3 IELTS groups(face-to-face)

I’ll also launch an online writing and probably reading course as well.

So stay tuned for more detailed posts.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

22 Dec, 11:50

🌅

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

21 Dec, 12:06

I wrote an essay for today’s topic here:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

21 Dec, 05:55

Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world.
What are the causes of this problem?
What measures can be taken to solve this?

Food waste has become a growing problem in many countries, perpetuating food insecurity for millions of people. While this can be attributed to strict food aesthetic standards and consumer behavior, the problem can be addressed by redistributing food surplus and taking advantage of mobile apps.

One major factor contributing to food waste is the high standards of perfection for the appearance of food. These standards often prioritize visual appeal, focusing on factors such as size, shape, color, and texture, which can result in perfectly edible food being thrown away simply because it does not meet the ideal appearance criteria. Korzinka, one of the well-known supermarket chains in Uzbekistan, recently faced criticism from the government and the public due to its careless attitude toward handling food. Unfortunately, despite such backlash, food waste remains a persistent problem. However, the public is not without fault either. Residential food waste is actually the most significant contributor to what is sent to landfills. This usually happens when people over-purchase or cook large portions that are not consumed, which often results from poor planning or lack of awareness.

However complex the problem might be, there are a number of ways by which it can be addressed. One effective measure would be to establish food redistribution programs. Such programs should collaborate with supermarkets and communities, particularly in areas where food insecurity is a widespread challenge, to ensure that perfectly edible yet aesthetically flawed food is not wasted. This action can have a two-fold impact by reducing the environmental impact of food waste while also alleviating food insecurity for many people.

Another approach, one that would complement the first, is to use food waste mobile apps. Such apps help users track what food items they have at home, preventing unnecessary purchases during shopping. These apps also send reminders about expiration dates or alerts when certain foods are close to spoiling, which can encourage people to use them before they become inedible. One such mobile application is ‘NoWaste’ which received overwhelmingly positive reviews among users.

In conclusion, the main reasons behind food waste are strict aesthetic standards for food and consumer behavior, such as over-purchasing and poor planning. However, this issue can be effectively tackled through measures like food redistribution programs and the use of innovative mobile apps.

#task2
#essay

Band 8.5

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

21 Dec, 04:33

The Moon. 21.12.2024. 9.31(Diyorbek’s IELTS Novza)

Goodluck to those taking the test today💜

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

04 Dec, 12:26

the phrase 'to leave somebody to their own device' means to allow somebody to make their own decisions but the essay also talks about how children might spend their free time using technology(devices)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

04 Dec, 10:18

Some people say free time activities for children should be organised by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a debate over who should be responsible for organizing children’s free time, with some arguing it is parents’ responsibility and others saying children should be given freedom to decide how they spend their free time. I believe that children benefit more from parental involvement and supervision.

Children, however, should be granted some autonomy. This freedom often fosters self-reliance and independence, both of which are crucial for personal development. For example, deciding how to spend their free time or manage their schoolwork teaches them accountability and time management. In contrast, if a child relies on their parents for even the most trivial matters, they may struggle to develop skills necessary to navigate real-life challenges independently.

In addition to encouraging children to be more self-reliant, allowing children to organize their free time can also compel them to explore their interests, leading to a better overall well-being. It is not uncommon for parents to urge their children to take up hobbies based on their own interests, completely disregarding the children’s personal preferences. Take my country – Uzbekistan. Sports are almost always the preferred option when parents select hobbies for their children, even though the children have a stronger interest in other pursuits, such as the arts. While this is not to say sports are unimportant, neglecting children’s preferences can result in dissatisfaction.

Those arguments notwithstanding, I still lean towards the conventional approach to organizing free time of children: parental involvement. First, parents often ensure that children engage in safe and appropriate activities. With the rise of technology, the way children spend their free time often revolves around social media, online games, and other hobbies of similar nature. In this context, parental supervision can protect children from excessive screen time and encourage them to do activities that promote physical well-being, ensuring a more balanced use of their free time.

A further argument supporting parental involvement is parents’ understanding of their children’s needs. Parents often have a deep understanding of their children’s strengths and weaknesses, which enables them to choose activities that complement their child’s personality and needs. For example, if a child has difficulty socializing, parents can organize playdates or group activities that help them build social confidence. However, when the child is left to their own devices, children are unlikely to consciously prioritize socializing.

In conclusion, while I acknowledge the benefits of giving children some freedom regarding how they spend their free time, I am strongly in favor of involving parents in this process, as they are better able to ensure safety and an environment that can further the overall development of their children.

#essay
#task2

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

04 Dec, 09:07

I wrote an essay using the good old approach: a total of 6 paragraphs, 400+ words

Wanna give it a read?

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Dec, 09:49

Here’s the table of contents.
Super intensive writing course, indeed.
Sign up: @diyorbeksielts_marathon

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Dec, 09:43

Today, we’ll finally start the writing intensive course.

You can still sign up for this course.
The first lesson is scheduled for today at 21.00!

Sign up: @diyorbeksielts_marathon

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

03 Dec, 08:57

❗️Navoi IELTS candidates❗️
Is your IELTS exam in December 21st or January 16th?

📃Then, use this opportunity to sit a mock exam at IELTS SCHOOL on December 15.

🤩Exact same kind of equipment that you'll see in the real IELTS test!

🎧The same headphones ✅
📃The same standard test papers ✅
📝The same answer sheets ✅

We are sure that this will be a totally new kind of mock test experience for you all.

🤩RESULTS IN JUST 2 DAYS
👨‍🏫 EXAMINER SCORES 8.5 AT LEAST
💲100.000 SUMS
⚠️No feedback or remark is offered.

Those subscribers from Navoi, Zarafshan and other places nearby Navoi city! This may be a good opportunity for you before your actual test.

☎️@ielts_school_admin
More info: WATCH THE VIDEO

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

02 Dec, 17:56

I love fake examples in essays but not fake-fake but authentic sounding fake examples.

Check out this paragraph I wrote about one cause of food waste.

One major factor contributing to food waste is the high standards of perfection for the appearance of food in supermarkets. These standards often prioritize visual appeal, focusing on factors such as size, shape, color, and texture, which can result in perfectly edible food being thrown away simply because it does not meet the ideal appearance criteria. For example, Korzinka, one of the well-known supermarket chains in Uzbekistan, recently faced criticism from the government and the public due to its careless attitude toward handling food. Unfortunately, despite such backlash, food waste remains a persistent problem.

#essay
#task2

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

01 Dec, 18:02

You can still sign up for the writing intensive course.

If your exam is around the corner, this is what you need. Super-intensive course.

Text to @diyorbeksielts_marathon to sign up!

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

30 Nov, 05:13

#essay

IELTS with SANOKULOV

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 17:44

Hope the lesson was useful ❤️

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 17:37

Live stream finished (1 hour)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 17:10

DECEMBER 21 & 28 TEST TAKERS, we’ve got your back!

ONLINE INTENSIVE WRITING COURSE:

✅ 15 live lessons(5 times a week)
✅ Feedback on 12 essays
✅ Sentence structures for each question type
✅ Collection of band 9 essays and reports

🚀BONUSES:
1 Reading Marathon by Diyorbek Hayitmurodov
2 Speaking Marathon by Jurabek Sanokulov

📆 starting date: December 2 (at 9pm)
💳 330,000UZS
📩 @diyorbeksielts_marathon

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 16:02

Live stream started

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 15:59

Live stream scheduled for Nov 29 at 15:59

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 15:56

Live stream started

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 15:47

We’ll start in about 10 minutes 👀🔥

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 12:35

There will be a discount on our new writing intensive course only if you join the livestream:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 08:33

Bugun kanalda WRITING TASK 2 - Causes/Effects/Solutions essays haqida bitta dars o'tamiz.
Dars davomida qanday qilib hamma causes/effects/solutions essays uchun har doim ishlatsa boladigan gaplar/so'zlarni ko'rib chiqamiz.

Yangi ochiladigan writing intensive kursi haqida ham malumot berib o'taman:)

Livestream: 21.00

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 08:07

This is the feedback I received on online writing courses:)

I’m super-glad that I could help candidates with their writing prep.

Have you join our writing courses 👇

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 06:00

O’g’iloy also studied in the IELTS standard group. Although the writing and speaking scores could have been higher, we’re not unhappy for a 7.0 either💪

🎧 LISTENING - 7.5
📖 READING - 7.5
✍️ WRITING - 6.0
🗣️ SPEAKING - 6.0

Congratulations, O’g’iloy🎉

#2425season

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Nov, 05:41

Dilnoza studied in my IELTS standard program and she’s been an excellent student. I’m super glad she pulled off a 7.0 though her score could have been a bit higher. 6.0 for her speaking is a war crime.

🎧LISTENING - 8.0
📖 READING - 7.5
✍️ WRITING - 6.5
🗣️ SPEAKING - 6.0

Congratulations, Dilnoza:)

#2425season

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29 Nov, 05:31

7️⃣

🔤

0️⃣

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28 Nov, 15:50

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20 Nov, 16:33

Here's the pdf of the essay analysis

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20 Nov, 14:15

ChatGPT cant do this💪

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

20 Nov, 13:51

🔤

7️⃣

🔤

0️⃣

Criteria for band 7.0

✅A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy.
✅Grammar and punctuation are generally well controlled, and error-free sentences are frequent.
✅A few errors in grammar may persist, but these do not impede communication.

I also checked the essay using the band 8.0 criteria, it met some of the requirements for band 8.0 but not all of them.
Criteria for band 8.0

✅A wide range of structures is flexibly and accurately used.
✅The majority of sentences are error-free, and punctuation is well managed.
✅Occasional, non-systematic errors and inappropriacies occur, but have minimal impact on communication

While the majority of the sentences are error-free and punctuation is well managed, I didn't use a wide range of structures.

Here's some of the complex sentence structures I used in the essay:

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While there are certain drawbacks to this, they are far outweighed by the benefits.

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when there is an ambiguous scene in a movie, people can always ask their partners for an explanation

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🔤

Despite these disadvantages, the advantages are greater.

These are very good sentence structures but they are not enough to score 8-9. Also, some of the sentence structures are repetitive. For example, I used 'when' multiple times, which shows the lack of flexibility.

#essay
#task2

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

20 Nov, 09:41

🔤

7️⃣

🔤

0️⃣

Criteria for band 7.0:
✅The resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision.
✅There is some ability to use less common and/or idiomatic items.
✅An awareness of style and collocation is evident, though inappropriacies occur.
✅There are only a few errors in spelling and/or word formation and they do not detract from overall clarity.

In general, I tried to use less common items such as an ambiguous scene, a better overall understanding, strengthen relationships, potential spoilers, but these are very limited.

I also lacked the flexibility, precision, and sophistication needed to meet higher criteria:

Here’s some minor mistakes:

🛑

noise of their phones - this phrase feels awkward because native speakers typically use "noise from" or specify the source of the sound more naturally.
✅’the distracting buzz of their phones' - would be a better alternative.

🛑

when they have a company - The phrase is grammatically off because "company" in this context doesn’t need an article and is typically used without "a."

✅

'when accompanied by friends or family' - would be a better alternative.

Overall, the essay lacks the sophistication, precision, and flexibility to get a higher score in LEXICAL RESOURCE.

#essay
#task2

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20 Nov, 06:37

Today, we’ll analyze Lexical Resource(Vocabulary) and Grammatical Range and Accuracy

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19 Nov, 18:46

Summarize the post below 👇

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

19 Nov, 18:41

🔤

8️⃣

🔤

0️⃣

Criteria for band 8.0:

The message can be followed with ease.
Information and ideas are logically sequenced, and cohesion is well managed.
Occasional lapses in coherence and cohesion may occur(this part is important)
Paragraphing is used sufficiently and appropriately.

Here's why:

When I checked the essay against the band 7 criteria, it didn't match

Band 7 criteria basically say:
✔️a few lapses
✔️some inaccuracies in referencing and substitution

These errors do not exist in the essay, so it must be a band 8 or 9 essay.

Honestly, there is no big difference between band 8 and 9 in Coherence and Cohesion.
The biggest difference is this:

✔️

Band 9: Lapses are minimal

✔️

Band 8: Lapses are occasional

In this context, a lapse is anything that makes the text hard to follow.
In my essays, I can point out two lapses:

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🔤Phrases like "another disadvantage" and "another advantage" are repeated in consecutive sentences

2️⃣

🔤The transition between the first disadvantage (lack of discussions) and the second disadvantage (lack of bonding) feels a bit sudden and abrupt.

Here's what can push it to band 9.0

1)Instead of repeating the word 'another', I can use alternatives like 'a further drawback' or 'an additional downside'

2)A linking sentence or phrase connecting the two ideas could make the flow smoother: 'In addition to missing discussions, being alone also impacts social interactions'

#task2
#essay

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19 Nov, 18:33

Another long post coming out on Coherence and Cohesion…

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19 Nov, 11:56

It’s a long post, but it’ll give you some insights into the difference between band 7 and 9 in task response.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

19 Nov, 11:50

🔤

7️⃣

🔤

0️⃣

Criteria for Band 7.0:

✅

The main parts of the prompt are appropriately addressed.

✅

A clear and developed position is presented.

✅

Main ideas are extended and supported but there may be a
tendency to over-generalise or there may be a lack of focus and
precision in supporting ideas/material.

Here's why:

✅I addressed all parts of the task by presenting two advantages and two disadvantages.
✅I presented a clear position throughout the response(the reader can clearly see what my opinion is in the intro/body paragraphs and in the conclusion)
❎There is no overgenralization because I tried to hedge(=soften my language) by using modal verbs and adverbs of frequency e.i This can result in - not This will result in, This usually means - not this means. However, there is a lack of precision in my supporting ideas/material.

For example:

The lack of social bonding is another disadvantage. Watching TV or movies with the whole family or a group of friends is regarded as a social event which can help strengthen relationships.

In this argument, I didnt actually explain HOW watching movies can strengthen bonds. I just mentioned the idea and didn't really support it.

Here's what a band 9.0 development would look like:

The lack of social bonding is another disadvantage. Watching TV or movies with the whole family or a group of friends is regarded as a social event which can help strengthen relationships. For instance, families can bond over emotional moments in a film or laugh together during a comedy show, creating lasting memories. Similarly, friends who watch movies together can engage in conversations about their favorite scenes or characters, deepening their connections and fostering a sense of togetherness

#task2
#essay

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

19 Nov, 10:19

Let’s analyze the essay in terms of each criterion.

➕

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19 Nov, 07:16

People these days watch TV, films, and other programs alone rather than with other people.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people increasingly prefer to be on their own when watching TV, films, and other programs. While there are certain drawbacks to this, they are far outweighed by the benefits.

One downside of watching movies alone is the lack of important discussions. For example, when there is an ambiguous scene in a movie, people can always ask their partners for an explanation, when they have a company. This can result in a better overall understanding of the content. In contrast, when the viewer is on their own, they do not have this opportunity. The lack of social bonding is another disadvantage. Watching TV or movies with the whole family or a group of friends is regarded as a social event which can help strengthen relationships. When a person decides to be by themselves, they are deprived of such an opportunity.

Despite these disadvantages, the advantages are greater. One major upside is that there will be fewer distractions. When a person has co-viewers, this usually means putting up with their questions, noise of their phones or eating, and even worse, potential spoilers. These can affect the overall experience, causing viewers to feel dissatisfied. Another advantage of being alone in front of the screen is the increased freedom. This independence ranges from being able to choose what a person watches to the opportunity to pause, rewind, and skip the movie when necessary.

In conclusion, the disadvantages of watching TV or movies alone include the lack of discussions and social bonding but they are not as significant as the advantages, such as reduced distractions and increased freedom.

Band 7-7.5

263 words

#essay
#task2
#classwork

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

18 Nov, 10:53

Using the prompts above, can you talk about the causes of increased noise levels in cities?

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

18 Nov, 10:51

If you are aiming for a high score in writing(usually 7+), you must be able to write very effective topic sentences.
A topic sentence means a sentence that shows the main idea of your paragraph/argument.

I often recommend students learning some universal sentences that can always be used in one particular question type. For example, to talk about the causes of a problem or causes in general, you can use the following sentences:

One significant factor contributing to this issue is...
Another major cause behind this problem is...
This problem can also be attributed to...

To talk about advantages, you can use these:

One notable advantage of X is...
Another key benefit is that...
A further positive aspect of this is...

Learning such sentences helps you save time and outline your arguments in a very precise manner.

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18 Nov, 06:05

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18 Nov, 04:01

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Nov, 15:43

The Moon and Jupiter are holding hands tonight:)

Right now

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17 Nov, 11:11

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

16 Nov, 15:49

Regular communication between employees and managers is the most important factor leading to a successful organization.

Do you agree or disagree?

#task2
#essay

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

14 Nov, 12:47

If you look at where the Sun has just set, you will see Venus - a bright star looking object. Venus is the second brightest celestial object in the night sky after the moon:).

It is quite rare to see Venus as it is usually visible just before the sunset. Take a picture of it and send it here 👇

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

14 Nov, 09:24

A very common mistake.

OUTWEIGHT is not an English word.

I don't know why but many students keep writing this word in 'advantage/disadvantage essays'
The the correct word is OUTWEIGH.

We say 'advantages outweigh the disadvantages'
Not 'advantages outweight the disadvantages'

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

13 Nov, 20:19

Which library does she work at tho

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

12 Nov, 11:42

Discuss both these views and give your opinion essay sample

Note that it’s been more than a year since I recorded this

#task2
#essay

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

12 Nov, 11:42

Some people say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree.

Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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11 Nov, 19:46

Some of my old posts still put a smile on my face (back when my channel was really good)

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I miss the old Kanye…

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

11 Nov, 05:49

Here’s my response to the map above:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

11 Nov, 05:49

The maps above show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

09 Nov, 11:35

Just received this message. Sharing with u too.

Yaxshi ko’rgan odamingiz telefon qilishi uchun🥰

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08 Nov, 08:44

There are a couple of seats available in this course. We’ll start on November 11.

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07 Nov, 11:52

As part of our lessons at Diyorbek’s IELTS, students are encouraged to read articles on different/common IELTS topics. Teachers provide the articles and supplementary videos on those topics.

So far this season, some of the topics that we’ve covered actually appeared in the real exam:
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-crime
-fashion
-government spending
-work-life balance

And today’s task 2 topic was too covered in our lessons just last week. We discussed why young couples should and should not take parenting courses and some other parenting-related topics.

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07 Nov, 07:41

This small article is full of useful chunks of language. Can you highlight some of them below?

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07 Nov, 06:40

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06 Nov, 17:54

I enjoy watching Vsauce. His videos are full of twists and turns. I was just watching his short on passenger pigeons - a bird species driven to extinction.

The video ends with some food for thought: what makes us human: It’s not our reasoning, it’s not our inventions. Maybe it’s grief and regret. For one species to mourn the death of another is a new thing under the sun. Had the funeral been ours, pigeons would hardly have mourned us.

What do you think? What distinguishes humans?

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

06 Nov, 17:34

Stuff in your past is like a carving on the bark of a sapling. Over time, the scar, the carving, won’t go away. Because of the way trees grow, it won’t go up or down much either. It’ll just stay right where it began, it might even get darker.

But it won’t get bigger.

You, however, can.

You can keep growing, doing more things, more branches, BEING more things.
The wound won’t get smaller, but you can make it a smaller part of who you are.

- Vsauce

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06 Nov, 08:38

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06 Nov, 04:01

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05 Nov, 07:50

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05 Nov, 07:35

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02 Nov, 15:01

The two maps show the evolution of a museum from 1998 to 2008. Overall, the museum underwent enhancements to create a more welcoming atmosphere for visitors. Notable changes include the introduction of a new restaurant, a café with a sitting area, and the addition of fountains. Additionally, older facilities were relocated during this transformation.

In 1998, the museum used to offer fewer facilities. The access was from the bottom, with a shop to the right and a temporary exhibition room located on the other side of the entrance. Further from the shop, there was a cloakroom, adjacent to which was the restroom. While two permanent exhibition rooms occupied the right and left wings of the museum, a spacious garden and a small café were situated between them.

By 2008, the museum had seen many changes in its layout. While the access remained intact, the temporary exhibition room made way for the cloakroom and the shop. The temporary exhibition room, in turn, was relocated next to the garden with a newly-built restaurant. These developments resulted in the disappearance of the permanent exhibition room on the left wing. Whereas the café remained in its original position, the restroom was moved just next to it. Other alterations included the expansion of the remaining permanent exhibition room, introduction of café sitting area and a fountain in the garden.

#task1
#report
#classwork

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

31 Oct, 20:57

It’s quite rare to see this many stars in Tashkent:)

The brightest celestial object in the middle is Jupiter:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

31 Oct, 11:59

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28 Oct, 16:32

Watch time: 6 minutes

Can you summarize the video 👇

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28 Oct, 16:31

https://youtu.be/VDiyQub6vpw?si=z_wg3CgSidaueXps

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28 Oct, 07:01

#classwork

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

26 Oct, 11:19

We had the same essay just yesterday with my IELTS groups👀👀

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

26 Oct, 10:37

Schools should use films, computers, and games instead of books.
Do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that books should be replaced by films, computers, and games. I completely agree with this proposal for three main reasons.

One advantage of using such modern teaching tools is they can make lessons more interactive. Students usually complain about reading books, saying that it is tedious and monotonous. Using computers, films, and games, on the other hand, would create a less formal and student-centered learning environment. For example, when a teacher uses short videos or puzzles during the lessons, students can feel more compelled participate in the lesson.

Another benefit is that making use of computers, films, and games can make the lessons more effective. There are many subjects which can be made more easily comprehensible through films. History and literature can be perfect cases in point. While reading about a historic event or finishing a novel can be boring or even challenging, students are more likely to find a feature film on the same event or novel more appealing.

A final argument is that using games particularly fosters the development of several skills. When a teacher organizes group games, this not only gives students a sense of competition but also teaches them such skills as collaboration, problem-solving, turn-taking, and distribution of tasks. These skills are crucial in the overall development of children, helping them navigate real-world challenges even after they finish school.

In conclusion, forgoing books in favor of films, computers, and games makes lessons more engaging and productive while helping students learn a range of skills. Therefore, I am in full agreement with the suggestion that schools should do away with books and use contemporary teaching aids instead.

Band 7.5

#essay
#task2
#jangimni_korsataman

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

23 Oct, 19:38

Couldn’t send an essay today:(
But tomorrow, I will🫰

How was your day, anyway?

#jangimni_korsataman

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

23 Oct, 04:40

A million dollar question:

Can I include numbers in the overview? 👀

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

22 Oct, 19:45

I might have overdone it a little bit as the report now has 305 words. But I tried to kinda experiment with it. You can see I used some unusual topic sentences:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

22 Oct, 19:43

Body paragraphs:

Although the prices were similar in 1997, that for the B country had a head start. Starting at around $125,000, the cost of housing in country B steadily increased to about $375,000 by 2005. However, in 2006, the market began to shift, leading to a decline in median prices for three consecutive years, dropping to just over $250,000 in 2008. This downward trend did not last, as housing prices began to rise again, reaching approximately $500,000 by 2010 and remaining relatively stable for the rest of the period.

The prices in country A had a similar start. They rose steadily to about $200,000 by 2001, a year when average price of housing began soaring, far exceeding that of the B country by 2003. This was followed by a decline in 2006, after which prices picked up again, rising to around $600,000 and remaining stable by 2014.

Unlike countries A and B, which experienced significant fluctuations, country C maintained a more consistent growth pattern throughout the period. The median price of housing was approximately $125,000 in 1997, a figure that then grew gradually year on year to just under $250,000 in 2007. After a notable dip in 2008, the upward trajectory continued, with the prices reaching around $270,000 by the end of the period.

#jangimni_korsataman

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

22 Oct, 19:09

OVERVIEW:

The line graph shows the changes in median house prices in three countries from 1997 to 2014. Overall, average house prices rose in all these countries, albeit to varying degrees. This period highlights significant changes in the housing markets of countries A and B, characterized by initial rapid growth, a subsequent decline, followed by a recovery phase and a final surge in prices by 2014. In contrast, house prices in country C experienced steady growth but also faced a significant dip before beginning to recover, ultimately leading to a resurgence in prices.

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22 Oct, 18:58

I will experiment the shit out of the report for this line graph. Just wait

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22 Oct, 17:18

Will send a report today as well.

#jangimni_korsataman

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

22 Oct, 09:39

10 words/phrases from the essay with definitions and examples:

Urgent problems: Issues that need immediate attention.
Example: Food shortages and natural disasters are urgent problems that governments must address.

Take priority: To be considered more important than other things.
Example: In an emergency, helping injured people should take priority over anything else.

Maintaining ecosystem balance: Keeping the natural environment in a healthy and stable state.
Example: Protecting bees helps in maintaining ecosystem balance, as they pollinate plants.

Equilibrium: A state of balance or stability.
Example: When predators and prey are in equilibrium, the environment remains healthy.

Compelling: Something that is convincing or very strong.
Example: The argument for reducing carbon emissions is compelling because it could prevent climate change.

Pushed many species to the brink of extinction: Nearly caused certain animals or plants to die out completely.
Example: Deforestation has pushed many species of animals to the brink of extinction.

Moral obligation: A duty to do what is right.
Example: Helping those in need is a moral obligation we all share.

Misallocation: Using resources or money in the wrong way or for the wrong purpose.
Example: Spending too much on luxury goods is a misallocation of your budget if you have bills to pay.

Underlying factors: The basic reasons behind a problem.
Example: Poverty and unemployment are underlying factors of crime in many cities.

Adequate sanitation: Having enough clean water and safe waste disposal to prevent disease.
Example: Many developing countries still struggle to provide adequate sanitation to their populations.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

21 Oct, 12:24

Almost each lesson, we create such argument lists.
Today’s topic was food shortage.

What solutions do you propose?

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21 Oct, 10:13

Nowadays, animals are becoming extinct and humans should focus on saving them, while others think humans should focus on their own problems.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a debate about which issue deserves the most attention. Some people advocate for greater conservation efforts, while others feel that more urgent problems – those that directly affect human well-being – should take priority. In my opinion, addressing our own issues would be a more effective use of resources.

Animal protection, however, should not be neglected altogether. Many animals are essential for maintaining ecosystem balance, and the dwindling number of species can disrupt this equilibrium. This disruption can lead to devastating consequences that impact animals, vegetation, and soil quality. For instance, the extinction of the Passenger Pigeon—once abundant in North America—negatively affected the growth of various tree species due to its crucial role in seed dispersal. The argument for saving animals is even more compelling considering that most extinctions are human-induced. Rapid urbanization, deforestation, poaching, and other factors have pushed many species to the brink of extinction. A notable example is the Tasmanian Tiger, a species declared extinct in the 20th century, largely due to hunting, habitat loss, and competition from introduced species. Such sad stories underscore humanity's moral obligation to protect animals.

However, prioritizing animal protection over other more pressing issues would be a total misallocation of human resources. One such serious problem is food shortages. With a global food crisis predicted due to global warming and wars, I would like to see governments pool their resources to ensure food security and to address the underlying factors that contribute to food crises. Another urgent humanitarian issue is displacement. Millions of people are forced to flee their homes due to armed conflicts, natural disasters, and economic factors. These people are often deprived of basic needs, including but not limited to housing, healthcare, and adequate sanitation. Allocating funds to animal conservation while there are humans suffering in worse circumstances seems hardly justifiable.

In conclusion, while the protection of animals is undeniably important for maintaining ecological balance and fulfilling our moral responsibilities, it cannot overshadow the pressing human issues that require immediate attention. Therefore, I advocate for prioritizing the resolution of these humanitarian issues.

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21 Oct, 05:00

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20 Oct, 19:09

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20 Oct, 19:01

Shu hafta to’liq o’z jangimni ko’rsataman. Like ham kerakmas. 5 reports and 5 essays yoziberaman band 8-9

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20 Oct, 18:56

Teacher qachon bir essaylarizdan ko'ramiz, kanalizam lekin trashga to'lib ketdi to'g'risi

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18 Oct, 20:35

Jupiter - just chilling

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18 Oct, 16:53

Diyorbek’s IELTS 😎o’qituvchisidan Reading va Writing marathon

C2 darajali o’qtuvchi bilan 30 kun bo’ladigon Reading va Writing marathon ga qo’shilib olamiz. Real-exam paper bilan ishlamoqchilarga ajoyib imkoniyat (R9/W8) Bugun 3-chi kun, qo’shilib olamiz

1 - The Development of the Silk Industry
2 - The Discovery of a Baby Mammoth 🦣
3 - What makes a musical expert?

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18 Oct, 05:09

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16 Oct, 18:12

Today, we had the first lesson with the new writing course students.

When I was explaining idea development, I gave used the following example. Which development seems better and why?

Another approach is to make lessons more interactive. For example, teachers should use modern teaching methods.

Another approach is to make lessons more interactive. For example. organizing games, using technology, and rewarding active participants can help make the lessons more engaging for students

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14 Oct, 18:52

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14 Oct, 08:54

At Diyorbek's IELTS, we discuss one IELTS topic each lesson

Students watch a video and read an article on the topic at home. They take notes of the arguments and vocabulary from the videos and articles. We then have a discussion at the lesson. Just last lesson, for example, we talked about 'Recidivism', a very common task 2 topic.

Below are some of the words we used to discuss the causes and solutions:

The recurrence of crime
to re-offend
a repeat offender
Behind bars – in jail
serve a sentence – spend some time in prison

Recidivism Reasons:
1. Systematic barriers – people with criminal record often struggle to find jobs, get education and housing.
To make ends meet
People with criminal record often struggle to make ends meet and as a result they often resort to crime.
Criminals often find it difficult to reintegrate into(=rejoin) society.
Phycological factors can also account for criminal behavior.
Substance abuse = drug abuse.
Criminal mind
Nature versus Nurture
Disadvantaged communities = underprivileged communities
Resilient
Investing rehabilitation and re-entry programs
Maximize employability
Intolerant of criminals

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13 Oct, 18:49

Bu zarbani manimcha Buffonam qaytarolmasdi

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13 Oct, 14:41

Sanokulov’s Team - DILC Cup winners 🏆

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12 Oct, 15:34

G’olibga 5 litr paxta moyi beriladi. Commentsda faol bo’lamiz🔥🔥🔥🔥

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12 Oct, 14:57

🎞 Watch as our teachers, Furqat Olimjonov and Sirojiddin Erkabayev, challenge themselves to write an introduction and an overview for a tough October 10 IELTS Writing question. 📊

Who could do it faster, and whose overview stands out? 🤼

Share your own overview in the comments. ⤵️

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10 Oct, 14:19

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10 Oct, 14:13

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09 Oct, 18:13

Meeen futbol o’ynab yurgan paytlarim Ronaldo hali Sporting akademiyasida edi😂😂

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08 Oct, 18:21

Diyorbek has some taste in music

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06 Oct, 17:53

How was ur day?)

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