Dilshodbek Ravshanov (9.0)

Today is the last day to sign up for this marathon ✏️

Contact @dilshodbekftw to register, I will be answering messages throughout the day. By the way, anyone who bought the 299K plan can get 99K back after the marathon finishes if they complete all tasks on time (and without using AI) 😎

There are 10 essays and 10 reports for like 24-25 days, so anyone with an organized timetable can do it. Deadlines for each task are long enough (at least 8 hours) 🤝

I had to add this for students who need extra motivation and more exciting deadlines💵

#LetsGo 🪙
#LastDay 📝

I will soon reply to all students who contacted me about the new writing course 👌🏼

I have to finish a lesson first, and I am planning to share it here, too.

Some of you remember my explanation of how essays should be analyzed. Well, I want to explain how reports should be studied as well.

Should be interesting to anyone who often struggles in terms of what they need to learn from a good Task 1 sample.

Stay tuned ⚡️

And another C1 result from Ayubbek, who studied in the same group as the previously mentioned student.

Could’ve been a 7.5, but I am happy to see a solid 7.0 🔥

Thanks for sharing, Ayubbek, now focus on other things in life and delete everything related to IELTS except my channel 😂

#HardWork 💯
#MidWeekResults 🏆

@ieltsaidbydilshodbek 🪩

For some reason, some students (October 10 exam) didn’t get an SMS today so we had to check results online.

Charos - my offline student - scored a 7.0, finally allowing her to focus on other subjects. I congratulate her one more time and thank for her the hard work over the past few months.

#HardWork 💯
#MidWeekResults 🏆

@ieltsaidbydilshodbek 🔑

Always watch a demo before joining 👌🏼

The last day to sign up for this marathon is Thursday 📆

#reminders ✏️

Lexical breakdown of the given essay (with more focus on the use of collocations) ⬇️

Advanced Vocabulary 🔠

1. Outrage – A strong feeling of anger or shock.
• Collocation: "More and more outrage" emphasizes the increasing intensity.

2. Wealth inequality – A common socio-economic issue relating to unequal distribution of wealth.
• Collocation: "Widening gap" between rich and poor.

3. Detrimental – Harmful or damaging.
• Synonyms: Adverse, injurious.
• Collocation: "Detrimental in two particular ways" (adds specificity).

4. Disproportionate – Out of balance or unequal.
• Collocation: "Disproportionate society" indicates societal imbalance.

5. Consciously or subconsciously – To distinguish between deliberate and unintentional actions.

6. Insecure – Lacking confidence or self-assurance.
• Collocation: "Feel more insecure" underlines psychological impact.

7. Desperation – A state of despair, often leading to risky behavior.
• Collocation: "Crimes out of desperation" adds emotional depth.

8. Mental health issues – Commonly used to describe a wide range of psychological challenges.
• Collocation: "Lead to mental health issues" suggests causality.

Subject-specific Vocabulary 🔠
1. Stress levels – A specific reference to the intensity of stress.
• Collocation: "Increased stress levels" highlights a trend.

2. Educational-related pressures – The pressures associated with academics.
• Collocation: Adds specificity to the cause of stress.

3. Aggressive – Physically or emotionally forceful behavior.
• Collocation: "More aggressive and less satisfied" contrasts emotional states.

4. Middle class – A socio-economic group often used in discussions of wealth inequality.
• Collocation: "Losing its power" suggests the declining influence.

More Collocations 🔠
1. Outperforming others – Implies competition or a drive to be better.
• Collocation: Shows the negative impact of competition on personal life.

2. Glued to their devices – A metaphorical phrase to describe excessive screen time.
• Collocation: Implies negative consequences of constant device usage.

3. Encourage one to commit a crime – Connects psychological states (anger, stress) to actions.
• Collocation: Suggests causality between emotional state and criminal behavior.

4. Direct relationship – A strong link between two elements.
• Collocation: "Direct relationship between increased anger and negative outcomes" makes the link explicit.

5. Express anger – The action of showing or venting feelings of anger.
• Collocation: Tied to outcomes like aggression and stress.

Idiomatic Expressions and Phrasal Verbs 🔠
1. Out of desperation – Indicates actions driven by extreme situations or emotions.
2. Feel more insecure about – A phrasal verb that highlights emotional instability.
3. Less focused on – Used to show diminishing attention or care toward something.

#AttentionToDetail 💯

@ieltsaidbydilshodbek 🔠

This evening, I will make a few more posts explaining the structure of a new course ⬇️

You can now sign up for a NEW WRITING COURSE/MARATHON and here’s what you get in it ⬇️

🔠 24 recorded lessons from previous writing courses (all types of task 1 and task 2 explained) ⏺

🔠 10 live lessons (specific lessons dedicated to all writing criteria, differences between band scores and common problems among students) ⏺

🔠 We will also analyze essays this way (with PDF files presented as part of homework) ⏺

🔠 Article analysis is included too ⏺

Live lessons will take place on Monday, Wednesday and Friday at 20:00 🗓

First lesson date: October 25th 📌
Approximate end of the course: November 24th 📌

There are two plans ⚡️

For just 99,000 sums, you can be an observer, which means you get all of the materials and access to all lessons (34 lessons overall) until January 31, 2025 📝

And for 299,000 sums, you can get a plan with feedback (10 essays and 10 reports checked until the end of the course) 🤝 Feedback is given with the help of my writing platform - Axiom ❤️

#NewWritingCourse 🔑

Target score: 7+ 🔠 (those who already have a 7 will be given instructions for 8+ as well) ✏️

Needed level: At least B2 (lessons are in English, sorry) 😎

To sign up, contact me @dilshodbekftw and please wait for the reply.

One more note for transparency: if you have 0 discipline or get demotivated really quick, skip this post and go for offline classes instead 🤝 I am not an entertainer and certainly not a motivational speaker.

@ieltsaidbydilshodbek 💯

New writing course soon ⚡️

Ok, now I can share the lesson with a peace of mind ⬇️

FIFA JUST ANNOUNCED THAT ARGENTINA’S 2022 WORLD CUP VICTORY MAY BE CANCELLED BECAUSE OF BRIBERY, INVESTIGATIONS CONTINUE 🚨

Or maybe there is no investigation, but I got you to pay attention now 👈

And another great writing performance by a writing marathon participant - Aisha ⚡️

The overall result also looks very solid, no section less than 7.0 📝

#results 💯

@ieltsaidbydilshodbek 🔑