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⚕️ سرویس تصحیح رایتینگ آیلتس تسک یک و دو توسط استاد سعیدی انجام می‌شود.
💬 برای جزئیات بیشتر به آیدی زیر پیام دهید.

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⭐⭐توضیحات دقیق از اشتباهات رایج گرامر:
◽From television
◽On television

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⚕چند ایده برای رایتینگ تسک دو مربوط به سوال بالا⭐⭐

⚪Supporting the Idea (Agreeing to some extent):

♻️Importance of foundational knowledge: Discuss the specific skills and knowledge that could be imparted in a parenting course (e.g., child development stages, healthy discipline techniques, effective communication strategies, basic nutrition and health).

♻️Addressing societal issues: Explore how a standardized parenting course could help mitigate common societal problems stemming from poor parenting practices (e.g., increased rates of child abuse, behavioral issues in children, educational challenges). Connect the courses to broader societal well-being.

⚪Challenging the Idea (Disagreeing to some extent):

💢Potential for standardization and inflexibility: Discuss the potential harm of creating a one-size-fits-all parenting course. Highlight the importance of individual approaches and the diverse needs of families. Explore the potential for rigid rules to be detrimental to a child's growth.

💢Defining "good parenting": Discuss the subjectivity of "good parenting" and the challenges of establishing universally accepted standards. Emphasize that different cultures and families have different approaches, each with potential benefits.
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☑️ آزمون: November 2024

Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?


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#November2024
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While there is a general understanding that sitting too much is likely bad for your health, there's a need for more research to understand the exact risks and the guidelines for what qualifies as too much sitting, said Dr. Keith Diaz, associate professor of behavioral medicine at Columbia University Medical Center. He was not involved in the research.

دکتر کیت دیاز، دانشیار پزشکی رفتاری در مرکز پزشکی دانشگاه کلمبیا که در این تحقیق شرکت نداشته است، می‌گوید: در حالی که درک کلی از مضرات نشستن بیش از حد برای سلامتی وجود دارد، نیاز به تحقیقات بیشتر برای درک دقیق خطرات و تعیین خطوط راهنمای میزان نشستن بیش از حد وجود دارد.
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"Our findings really emphasize the importance of avoiding excess sitting ... whether or not you're physically active," said first study author Dr. Ezim Ajufo, a cardiology fellow at Brigham and Women's Hospital in Boston.

نشستن تمام روز پشت میز کار می‌تواند خطر ابتلا به بیماری‌های قلبی را افزایش دهد، حتی اگر در اوقات فراغت خود ورزش کنید؛ این یافته حاصل تحقیقات جدید است.
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⚠️ Sitting too much linked to heart disease - even if you work out, according to new study

• Sitting at your desk all day may put you at greater risk for heart disease -- even if you work out in your spare time , according to new research.

مطالعه جدید نشان می‌دهد که نشستن طولانی مدت با بیماری‌های قلبی مرتبط است، حتی اگر ورزش کنید.

• نشستن تمام روز پشت میز کار می‌تواند خطر ابتلا به بیماری‌های قلبی را افزایش دهد، حتی اگر در اوقات فراغت خود ورزش کنید؛ این یافته حاصل تحقیقات جدید است.
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• November's full Moon is likely called the Beaver Moon because beavers are particularly active at this time of year as they prepare for the winter months ahead.

• ماه کامل نوامبر احتمالا به این دلیل ماه بَبر نامیده می‌شود که در این زمان از سال، ببرها به شدت برای آماده شدن برای ماه‌های زمستان فعال هستند.
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⚠️ The Beaver Moon - the final supermoon of the year has made a dazzling appearance in skies across the world. It was not quite as bright as last month's Hunter's supermoon, but still provided some stunning photographs.

• ماهِ بَبر - آخرین اَبَرماه سال - در آسمان سراسر جهان نمایشی خیره کننده داشت. هرچند به اندازه اَبَرماه شکارچی ماه گذشته درخشان نبود، اما باز هم عکس‌های شگفت‌انگیزی از آن گرفته شد.
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♒️ بخشی از ویدئو تصحیح رایتینگ تسک ۱ و ۲ یکی از متقاضیان 📝


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⚕چند ایده برای رایتینگ تسک دو مربوط به سوال بالا⭐⭐

⚪Main Reasons for Long-Distance Relationships:

♻️Career Opportunities: One or both partners may have job offers in different locations that are too good to pass up. This is a very common reason for long-distance relationships.

♻️Education: Pursuing higher education (Master's, PhD, etc.) often requires individuals to move to different cities or countries.

⚪Maintaining Individuality:

♻️Personal Time and Hobbies: Encourage each other to pursue individual hobbies and interests. This helps maintain a sense of self and prevents the relationship from becoming all-consuming.

♻️Trust and Independence: Trust is paramount in long-distance relationships. Avoid excessive checking in or controlling behavior.

⚪Focusing on the Future:

♻️Shared Goals and Plans: Discuss your future plans and goals as a couple. Having a shared vision for the future strengthens commitment and provides motivation.

♻️Defined Timeline: If possible, set a realistic timeline for when the distance will end. This gives both partners something concrete to work towards.
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☑️ آزمون: November 2024

Sometimes spouses have to live far away from each other. Maintaining a long distance relationship is sometimes difficult and straining.
What do you think are the main reasons for long distance relationships? What can be done to help couples feel closer in such situations?


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⚠️ Your brain is a lot more than the keeper of your brilliance: It controls your ability to breathe, enjoy music, and give someone a hug—all without your being aware that it's involved. These things happen when chemical messengers are passed from cell to cell in a superfast chain reaction. If anything disrupts that communication, there goes your ability to engage with the world and even potentially the oxygen you need to live.

• مغز شما خیلی بیشتر از یک حافظ هوش و استعداده: تنفس، لذت بردن از موسیقی و حتی یه آغوش گرم رو هم مغز شما کنترل می‌کنه، بدون اینکه شما حتی متوجه شوید. این کارها با انتقال پیام‌رسان‌های شیمیایی از سلولی به سلول دیگه، توی یه واکنش زنجیره‌ای فوق‌العاده سریع، انجام می‌شن. اگر این ارتباط به هر دلیلی مختل شود، هم توانایی تعامل با دنیای بیرون رو از دست می دهید، هم ممکنه اکسیژن لازم برای زنده موندنتون رو از دست دهید.
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⚠️ مثال های بیشتر در فایل بالا:

✅ We say a fast car, fast food, (❌NOT a quick car, quick food).

✅ We say a quick meal, (❌NOT a fast meal).

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📁Over Top 300 Mistakes Almost Students Make and How to Avoid Them

⭐⭐فایل بسیار کاربردی که شامل 300 مثال از اشتباهات رایج گرامر همراه با پاسخ صحیح

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📌 تفاوت دو لغت
1⃣ Complement
2⃣ Compliment

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⭐⭐⭐ توضیحات دقیق از تفاوت دو عبارت زیر
⏩Deploy
⏩Employ

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