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29 Feb, 10:40

Some people believe that growing in the rural area is better, by contrast others prefer to live in city. In this essay i will describe the pros and cons of living in city and countryside. One the One hand, living in the city is more comfortably such as better service and good at telo communication and also public transport is of great importance in addition to that more and more workplace is located in city as well as many shopping mall and movie theateres are taken place in cities and this opportunities yeild a busy life style to everyone for example who lives in the city have many chances to choose study place.
One the other hand, spending time in rural area is so benefit, firstly offers calm and also relaxation to our mind and do not any crowed, secondly it gives free lands to cultivate a grocery, however occupant does not spend a busy life, unlike the city such as in Sri Lanka of many hospitals are located in villages, thus too many people live in villages, that is why live in rural area shows many service in there while living do not any air and sound pollution in countryside is better than city.
To sum up, in my view novadays everyone in busy life, therefore choosing convenient to live in the city rather than growing in rural area not knowing live in city of affects.

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