Bugungi reading passage 3.
16.11.2024
16.11.2024
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
@fayozova_sevinch
📌 Mainly about IELTS
Fayozova Sevinch [ IELTS 7.0 | LISTENING 8.5 | WRITING 7.0 ]
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Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0] (English)
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Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
16 Nov, 11:50
200$ uvol qildim, azizlar 😭
Me in the middle of the exam: Exx 200$ ga yangi tel osam bolardi 🗿.
Me in the middle of the exam: Exx 200$ ga yangi tel osam bolardi 🗿.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
04 Nov, 15:09
Kimdir kuladigan reaksiya bosibdi bo’ldi jo’natmiman 😂.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
04 Nov, 11:05
I have just written a report for Task 1 Map question.
Send it —->🐳
Send it —->
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
04 Nov, 09:29
— One of the best books for IELTS Writing.
PS: However, this book alone is not enough.
PS: However, this book alone is not enough.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
27 Oct, 20:10
#just
Stop looking for someone who is not looking for you.
Know your worth, ma frend😊
Stop looking for someone who is not looking for you.
Know your worth, ma frend
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
27 Oct, 16:21
YAQINDA KITOB O’QISHNI BOSHLAMOQCHIMAN…
To’g’risini aytsam umuman o’qish ko’nikmasi rivojlanmagan menda. Balkim shuning uchun ham Reading dan 6.5 olgandurman. Endi ko’proq kitob o’qimoqchiman FOR FUN. Hech narsa uchun emas. Shunchaki biror bilmagan narsamni bilib qolish uchun.
O’zizda eng ko’p tassurot uyg’otgan kitobni yozib keting:
(Men ekzaminimdan keyin o’qib ko’raman⚡️ )
To’g’risini aytsam umuman o’qish ko’nikmasi rivojlanmagan menda. Balkim shuning uchun ham Reading dan 6.5 olgandurman. Endi ko’proq kitob o’qimoqchiman FOR FUN. Hech narsa uchun emas. Shunchaki biror bilmagan narsamni bilib qolish uchun.
O’zizda eng ko’p tassurot uyg’otgan kitobni yozib keting:
(Men ekzaminimdan keyin o’qib ko’raman
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
27 Oct, 16:13
This is a solid 7.5-band essay.
Analyze it and steal the language, if you want🔠
I had my essay checked by a band 8.0 holder in Writing.
Analyze it and steal the language, if you want
I had my essay checked by a band 8.0 holder in Writing.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
27 Oct, 15:57
#just
Looking smart is far easier than being so. Don’t mix them up.
Looking smart is far easier than being so. Don’t mix them up.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
27 Oct, 15:50
#just
We are living in a society where standards are set too high, causing people to work extremely hard and relentlessly. This is often viewed as productivity. In this society, taking a break is seen as a sign of failure.
We are living in a society where standards are set too high, causing people to work extremely hard and relentlessly. This is often viewed as productivity. In this society, taking a break is seen as a sign of failure.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
26 Oct, 22:02
#just
“I will live a peaceful life after I get my IELTS certificate” - That had been my last thought before I took the exam. I am thinking about the “peaceful life” again. LOL🥹
Pathetic
“I will live a peaceful life after I get my IELTS certificate” - That had been my last thought before I took the exam. I am thinking about the “peaceful life” again. LOL
Pathetic
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
26 Oct, 19:40
PS: El klasiko ko’rmiyapman ! 😎
Chunki yaqinda IELTS topshiraman 😢
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
26 Oct, 16:21
#just
A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new.
A person who never made a mistake never tried anything new.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
26 Oct, 14:54
Used correctly, this paragraphing can take your writing to the next level
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
25 Oct, 23:11
Let me show you THE WRONG APPROACH too:
➡️ Intro
➡️ Body 1: 1️⃣ advantage + 1️⃣ disadvantage
➡️ Body 2: 1️⃣ advantage + 1️⃣ disadvantage
➡️ Conclusion
Here paragraphing is NOT LOGICAL❌
Here paragraphing is NOT LOGICAL
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
25 Oct, 23:06
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
25 Oct, 16:58
#just
Why can’t I be a good speaker even if I practice so many times a day ?! WHY ?🫠
Balkim men speaking uchun tug’ilmagandirman🫥
Why can’t I be a good speaker even if I practice so many times a day ?! WHY ?
Balkim men speaking uchun tug’ilmagandirman
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
24 Oct, 14:15
#just
Took a short break from my studies. Now feeling awesome🔋
Took a short break from my studies. Now feeling awesome
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
22 Oct, 19:29
Everything beyond the arrow is nothing but a distraction.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
22 Oct, 13:18
PS 2: Demonstrate so’zini definition iga qarasez process larga ko’proq mos tushishini bilib olasiz … 🔛
Shuning uchun men hamma process larimga demonstrate so’zini ishlataman✅
Shuning uchun men hamma process larimga demonstrate so’zini ishlataman
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
22 Oct, 13:12
PS: Writing an introductory sentence is not compulsory
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
22 Oct, 10:36
Look carefully at what Pauline Cullen says.
➡️ Points to notice ❕
I have never seen a band 8.0 + report where words like “below”, “given” are included.
I have never seen a band 8.0 + report where words like “below”, “given” are included.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
22 Oct, 10:11
Very cliched and mechanical way to start an intro/overview. It is not recommended to write so.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
22 Oct, 10:03
#just
Create your own style and be unique. Stop copying. Stop imitating.
Create your own style and be unique. Stop copying. Stop imitating.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 22:30
#decision
Agar Writing dan 8.0 osam, ushbu kanalni Writing uchun bag’ishlayman. I swear❕
Agar Writing dan 8.0 osam, ushbu kanalni Writing uchun bag’ishlayman. I swear
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 22:21
How to write introductions for a 🔤 🔤 🔤 🔤 🔤 🔤 🔤 in Writing Task 1🔤
➡️ The pictures illustrate how … is made/produced/recycled.
➡️ The pictures show the steps involed in making/producing … .
➡️ The diagram highlights the
process by which … is made/produced/recycled.
🔗 Make use of it!
process by which … is made/produced/recycled.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 21:51
I failed to keep my promise ❌
And punished myself with writing two reports✅
The punishment has been accepted🫡
And punished myself with writing two reports
The punishment has been accepted
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 21:45
The process demonstrates the steps involved in the production of tea and how a cup of tea is made.
Overall, the process is comprised of three primary stages in which tea is produced and made ready to consume, including cultivation, delivery and preparation to drink.
Tea is native to India and China. Initially, seeds are sown across a field, making them readily available to absorb sunlight that the plants need to grow. After this stage, tea leaves are picked and put in basket before they are dried. Once this cultivation phase comes to end, the ready products are packed into boxes before being loaded onto a lorry, which serves to deliver the tea boxes to supermarkets where they can be sold.
After undergoing the stages above, ‘preparing a cup of tea’ phase comes, in which some water is boiled and poured into a cup containing a tea bag. Having done so, it should be left for two minutes. After this step, some milk and sugar can be added in to make its flavor more special. Finally, it is ready to be drunk.
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Overall, the process is comprised of three primary stages in which tea is produced and made ready to consume, including cultivation, delivery and preparation to drink.
Tea is native to India and China. Initially, seeds are sown across a field, making them readily available to absorb sunlight that the plants need to grow. After this stage, tea leaves are picked and put in basket before they are dried. Once this cultivation phase comes to end, the ready products are packed into boxes before being loaded onto a lorry, which serves to deliver the tea boxes to supermarkets where they can be sold.
After undergoing the stages above, ‘preparing a cup of tea’ phase comes, in which some water is boiled and poured into a cup containing a tea bag. Having done so, it should be left for two minutes. After this step, some milk and sugar can be added in to make its flavor more special. Finally, it is ready to be drunk.
(202 words)
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 21:12
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 21:08
The process demonstrates the stages in which aluminium cans are recycled.
Overall, there are 3 major stages involved in the entire process: before, during and after the recycling phase.
The whole recycling process commences from throwing away obsolete cans prior to the step where these cans are collected and carried by a truck. Upon the arrival of this particular stage, these cans are cleaned, sorted, shredded and compressed, making them ready for the next stage where they are melted by extreme heat.
After being heated, it comes into new existence, thereafter which it is rolled up in thickness of 2.5 mm - 6 mm just before it is recycled. After undergoing the stages above, the final product is ready to be reused. In the UK, usually three quarters of aluminum is recycled.
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Overall, there are 3 major stages involved in the entire process: before, during and after the recycling phase.
The whole recycling process commences from throwing away obsolete cans prior to the step where these cans are collected and carried by a truck. Upon the arrival of this particular stage, these cans are cleaned, sorted, shredded and compressed, making them ready for the next stage where they are melted by extreme heat.
After being heated, it comes into new existence, thereafter which it is rolled up in thickness of 2.5 mm - 6 mm just before it is recycled. After undergoing the stages above, the final product is ready to be reused. In the UK, usually three quarters of aluminum is recycled.
(155 words)
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 18:41
QUESTION: Ushbu processda nechta asosiy stage lar bor ? ⁉️
Write in the comments below⬇️ :
Write in the comments below
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 18:06
Buni bitta ko’ring, OVERVIEW yozish haqida fikriz o’zgaradi 🧑🎓
⬆️ ⬆️ ⬆️
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 17:50
Sizam xohlasez komentga o’zizni «собственный» OVERVIEW izni yozib qoying, o’qib ko’raman. 🙂
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 17:47
NEGA bu overview ⚡️ dan yuqori ball ololmaydi?
To’gri grammar tomondan xatosiz yozilgani ba’zilarni chalg’itib qo’ygan bo’lishi mumkin,🤔 LEKIN bu overview da shunchaki nechta step borligi va nimadan boshlanib, nimada tugashi aytilgan , lekin yaqinroqdan qaraganda 2-3 ta asosiy bosqich bor xolos. A biz esa overview da MAIN FEATURE ni yozishimiz kerak. XULLAS, steplar ni grouping qilishiz kerak. O’shanda decent overview yozgan hisoblanasiz.😎
REWRTITTEN VERSION:⬇️
Overall, there are 3 major stages involved in the entire process: the stages before, during and after the recycling phase.
3 MAJOR STAGES:
1️⃣ recycle qilinishigacha bo’lgan davr
2️⃣ recycle qilinishini o’zi
3️⃣ recycle qilib bo’linganidan keyingisi
(Shunaqasiga grouping qisak bo’ladi hozirgi holatga)
To’gri grammar tomondan xatosiz yozilgani ba’zilarni chalg’itib qo’ygan bo’lishi mumkin,
REWRTITTEN VERSION:
Overall, there are 3 major stages involved in the entire process: the stages before, during and after the recycling phase.
3 MAJOR STAGES:
(Shunaqasiga grouping qisak bo’ladi hozirgi holatga)
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 17:21
To’ppa-to’g’ri jovob shu bo’ldi ✅ .
Bu OVERALL g’irt⚡️ ballik Overall edi.
Bu OVERALL g’irt
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
21 Oct, 17:20
6 or 6+ chunki mem ham teacherimga wunday holda yozb korsatgandm wunaqa dedi.(teacher who has 7.5 in writing section)
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
20 Oct, 16:17
I, personally, watch both of them. But I prefer anime to dorama. As it is more realistic and has a lot to touch the strings of hearts…
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
20 Oct, 16:04
📝 Some people say we do not need printed paper newspapers any more.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a view that the printed media is becoming obsolete. While people are more exposed to read news on the Internet, I would argue that newspapers will keep holding the most vital position in the future because of their convenience for particular segment of society and and reliability.
There are some compelling reasons why I think newspapers will constantly be in use. One of them is they are the most reliable source of information. Not everything we see on the Internet is trustworthy as people can share everything in a way that they want us to read. For this reason, we oftentimes come across rather fake or biased information. Unlike the news on the Internet, newspapers are usually edited and carefully checked before they come out. Thus, there is a high chance that printed newspapers will maintain their dominance.
Additionally, most of the elderly are not tech-savvy, which, in turn, means they do not know how to use electronic gadgets. As a result, they cannot access the news spreading on social media only because they do not have a basic knowledge of computer technology. Obviously, reading news in printed newspapers is more convenient for them.
In conclusion, while I recognize that reading paper newspapers might seem unreasonable because of the rapid advancement of social media platforms, I do not necessarily agree with this view because of the reliability and the specific audience printed newspapers serve.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a view that the printed media is becoming obsolete. While people are more exposed to read news on the Internet, I would argue that newspapers will keep holding the most vital position in the future because of their convenience for particular segment of society and and reliability.
There are some compelling reasons why I think newspapers will constantly be in use. One of them is they are the most reliable source of information. Not everything we see on the Internet is trustworthy as people can share everything in a way that they want us to read. For this reason, we oftentimes come across rather fake or biased information. Unlike the news on the Internet, newspapers are usually edited and carefully checked before they come out. Thus, there is a high chance that printed newspapers will maintain their dominance.
Additionally, most of the elderly are not tech-savvy, which, in turn, means they do not know how to use electronic gadgets. As a result, they cannot access the news spreading on social media only because they do not have a basic knowledge of computer technology. Obviously, reading news in printed newspapers is more convenient for them.
In conclusion, while I recognize that reading paper newspapers might seem unreasonable because of the rapid advancement of social media platforms, I do not necessarily agree with this view because of the reliability and the specific audience printed newspapers serve.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 20:59
Vayy daje 250 ta so’z bo’mabdi, 220 ta bo’b qobdi. Xullas bu esseydi o’qimaylar o’qishga arzimaydi😂.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 20:41
19-Oktyabrda tushgan Writing task 2 savoliga essey yozdim. Biroq menga yoqmadi yozganim.
—-> weak arguments
—-> not being able to include counter arguments
—-> not being able to include any examples
Ko’nglim to’lmadi xullas 😅
—-> weak arguments
—-> not being able to include counter arguments
—-> not being able to include any examples
Ko’nglim to’lmadi xullas 😅
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 20:36
📝 TASK 2: These days people prefer to watch live performances (Shows, concerts) through tv or computer, online rather than go to the place of event.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, it is relatively easy to have access everything with the aid of the Internet. So watching live shows and concerts online is becoming more and more popular than watching them offline. I fully agree with this point since it is more convenient and time-saving to watch events online.
One of the reasons why I believe it is a great idea to be an online viewer is convenience. More precisely, when people watch these live events online, the only thing they need is a good internet connection, which means people do not have to book tickets in advance or wait for a taxi outside. They simply connect to the Internet and watch it from the comfort of their home.
In addition, it is time-consuming to go to the venue where a concert or a show is performed. People usually travel by public transports such as a bus or a tube which takes quite a lot to reach a destination. Consequently, people might lose a track of time if they choose to watch live events offline.
In conclusion, while the idea of viewing live shows/concerts in the place of them seems appealing on the face of it, I do think that people opt for watching them from their home because of the comfort and the time-saving feature of it.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, it is relatively easy to have access everything with the aid of the Internet. So watching live shows and concerts online is becoming more and more popular than watching them offline. I fully agree with this point since it is more convenient and time-saving to watch events online.
One of the reasons why I believe it is a great idea to be an online viewer is convenience. More precisely, when people watch these live events online, the only thing they need is a good internet connection, which means people do not have to book tickets in advance or wait for a taxi outside. They simply connect to the Internet and watch it from the comfort of their home.
In addition, it is time-consuming to go to the venue where a concert or a show is performed. People usually travel by public transports such as a bus or a tube which takes quite a lot to reach a destination. Consequently, people might lose a track of time if they choose to watch live events offline.
In conclusion, while the idea of viewing live shows/concerts in the place of them seems appealing on the face of it, I do think that people opt for watching them from their home because of the comfort and the time-saving feature of it.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 18:27
#just
One type of people that I really really hate is someone taking so long to answer a “Yes or No” question. I don’t know why they beat around the bush. It’s really irritating for real. Is it really difficult to say “Yes” or “No” and to give a reason or two if necessary ? I just ask something on You tube and one “nerd” pops up and delivers a 10 minute-length speech 😂. I just forget what my question was.
- time
- exact answer
One type of people that I really really hate is someone taking so long to answer a “Yes or No” question. I don’t know why they beat around the bush. It’s really irritating for real. Is it really difficult to say “Yes” or “No” and to give a reason or two if necessary ? I just ask something on You tube and one “nerd” pops up and delivers a 10 minute-length speech 😂. I just forget what my question was.
- time
- exact answer
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 18:00
#just
I have realized one paradox:
— THE MORE you try to attract somebody, THE LESS you attract them. THE MORE you chase something, THE LESS the chance that you can get it. These are just 2 examples.
Seems a lot of things work this way.
I have realized one paradox:
— THE MORE you try to attract somebody, THE LESS you attract them. THE MORE you chase something, THE LESS the chance that you can get it. These are just 2 examples.
Seems a lot of things work this way.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 17:21
0.5 farq. Lekin Reading 8.0 ni bemalol maqsad qilolaman. Chunki Reading ≠ Writing.
Juda ma’noli.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 17:16
— Nega 8.0 emas?
— Writing band 8.0 seems a bit unrealistic to me. As a realist, I can only imagine something achievable.
— Writing band 8.0 seems a bit unrealistic to me. As a realist, I can only imagine something achievable.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 17:00
Mana endi yozamiz-da 🫠. Cuz the next destination is Writing 7.5.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 16:09
#tip Reading
Make sure you understand the question before reading the passage.
Make sure you understand the question before reading the passage.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 16:01
Writing dan 7.0 ogan bo’sam umrimda biror marta ham mixed graph ga report yozmaganman. 😂
10.000 + aura 😂
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 14:34
1. @diyorbeksielts
2. @alisherposts
3. @ieltswithsanokulov
All of them are band 9.0 holders. Every IELTS-related stuff you see on their channels is reliable 💯.
2. @alisherposts
3. @ieltswithsanokulov
All of them are band 9.0 holders. Every IELTS-related stuff you see on their channels is reliable 💯.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 14:25
Do you want me to recommend you the most authentic and helpful telegram channels related to IELTS ❓
(I have known 3 of them so far)
Go —-> 👍
(I have known 3 of them so far)
Go —-> 👍
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 12:23
#just
Be someone who inspires others by their actions.
Be someone who inspires others by their actions.
Fayozova Sevinch [L:8.5; W:7.0]
19 Oct, 11:59
#tip Writing: CC
Do not start each of your sentences with linking words.
Do not start each of your sentences with linking words.
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